1.Montreal is my hometown.
what is the name of your hometown?
2. Montreal is in Quebec,Canada.
Where is Montreal?
3. If you travel to Montreal,you should go in the summer.
When should you travel to Montreal?
4.For three weeka,you should take $600.
How mach money should you take?
5. You have to use Canadian currency.
What kind of currency should you use?
6. You should know a few works in French.
Which language should you know?
7.You can't smoke in restaurants.
What can't you do in restauranes?
8. Canadians don't have to have a passport,but landed immigrants have to have one.
DO Canadians have to have a passport?
Do landed immigrants hanve to have a passport?
9. For summer,you should bring shorts,t-shirts and a jacket for night time.
What should you bring for summer?
10. You should take the subway and buses.
How should you get around?
11. You have to drive on the right side of the road.
Which side of the road should you drive?
12. You should vist downtown,old Montreal st.Dennis street,and McGill University.
What places should you vist?
13. You should try quiche.
What kind of food should you try?
14. You might feel too hot in summer.
What kind of problems you might have？
15.You can walk alone in places with lots of people.
What can you do ?

Hi Susan,please correct me! thank you!

I'll correct your homework after you write me a story about your hometown!

Montreal is my hometown.
What is the name of your hometown?
2. Montreal is in Quebec,Canada.
Where is Montreal?
3. If you travel to Montreal,you should go in the summer.
When should you travel to Montreal?
4.For three weeks,you should take $600.
How much money should you take?
5. You have to use Canadian currency.
What kind of currency should you use?
6. You should know a few words in French.
Which language should you know?
7.You can't smoke in restaurants.
What can't you do in restauranes?
8. Canadians don't have to have a passport,but landed immigrants have to have one.
Do Canadians have to have a passport?
Do landed immigrants hanve to have a passport?
9. For summer,you should bring shorts,t-shirts and a jacket for night time.
What should you bring for summer?
10. You should take the subway and buses.
How should you get around?
11. You have to drive on the right side of the road.
Which side of the road do you have to drive on?
12. You should vist downtown,Old Montreal St.Dennis street,and McGill University.
What places should you vist?
13. You should try quiche.
What kind of food should you try?
14. You might feel too hot in summer.
What kind of problems might you have？
15.You can walk alone in places with lots of people.
What can you do?
Excellent Work. Very few mistakes.

Sure.I write it now. Thanks a lot.

My hometown
1.FuZhou is my hometown.
2. FuZhou is in FuJian,China.
3. If you travel to FuZhou,you should go in the spring or autumn. Summer is very hot, so summer is not good for travel .
4. In the spring and autumn ,the weather is good in FuZhou. You should just bring shorts, T-shirts, skirts and jeans for all day.
5.For two weeks,you should take $400 or $1800.
It depends on the hotels and restaurants that you choose.
6. You have to use RMB currency.
7. You should know a few works in Mandarin.
8. You should take the buses,taxis and tricycles.
9. You have to drive on the right side of the road.
10. You should visit downtown, Drum Mountain and SanFangQiXiang . Many famous people lived in SanFangQiXiang before, and the building was built in Qing and Ming dynasty.
11. You should try FuZhou Fish balls and many FuZhou special foods.
12.You can dance or sing alone in places with lots of people in the morning or in the evening. (in the parks)
13. I am missing my hometown when I write this story. I am also missing my family,friends and foods.
14. Welcome to FuZhou.
Hi Susan,please correct me! thank you!

Excellent Work. Only a very few errors!

8. You should take the buses,taxis and bicycles.
10. Many famous people lived in SanFangQiXiang before, and the buildings were built in the Qing and Ming Dynasties.
11. FuZhou Fish Balls (capitals for names)
13. I am missing my hometown as I write this story. I am also missing my family, friends and foods.